The Mill x SCAD

cropping of painting, inset. Can start feeling the story. In shot 01, thinner and smaller picture frame. Work on the framing in the shot.

all – are we inside the gallery? check perspective, doesn’t read correctly, is this industrial museum? look at references. Hard to tell where we are? are we inside of the gallery? check the perspective of the wall and how it relates to the character, something feels off. Industrial gallery? or a traditional clean museum? See how the character appears in the studio and appears in the painting, how does it look?

Shot 01, Check placement on shot C02? something still seems off in the perspective of this shot. Other big thing is to get a layout in all of the shots,. What is the studio going to look like? How does the character stand out from the background? Have studio

A02 she should be black and white until when? Whole world is black and white. Is the character part of the black and white world too? Why does she have color but not everything else. Confusion on the color transition, include in the edit. There would be 2 color transitions?

get studio in to other shots

check chair/table – feels off

revisit cut

FX – good – smoke is more interesting. FX have been looking nice.

knock the skittles back, perimeter of pyro. the skittles that are popping outside of the smoke are extra, knock those back a little bit to create a much more interesting effect. Just a suggestion.

thoughts on less voronoi color pattern?

Feels like a double action on cut to the next shot, trim a little but from that shot where the smoke is starting. Work on transitions and cut. Add another beat of the painting before the action starts? the placement feels double time